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Powerful ending. The best super power .
I would chose flying because you could go
Cool places and. you go all around the world I would
Go to see my auntie in america I could go places
Without my mum and you could use it to
Do a bit of mischief I would go to spain
And take stase with my and we would met
Ronaldo.
If you were late to school you could fly at the speed
Of sound and you would never be late again
And you could go to space .
Like the story maybe check your spelling and put a bit more detail but I like how you said were you would go and why and who with
ReplyDeleteE.G i would go to Spain with Stace to meet Ronaldo.
cool post
ReplyDeletepeoples names have a capital letter ok Joshuha
cool post
ReplyDeletepeoples names have a capital letter ok Joshuha
good story Josh but maybe work on your punctuation, but I like your detail. keep up the good work
ReplyDeletecool story rember capitals and full stops
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